Caryma, you are pretending to write about Chris Sky, but what you are really writing about is yourself, specifically, that you dislike Chris Sky.
Calling him a "playboy", for example, might (or might not) be accurate, but it's irrelevant to helping your readers decide whether or not to vote for him.
Unless you think your readers are more interested in Sky's personal life than in the ideas he offers as a political candidate.
You wrote:
Municipal politics is significant because it represents the level of government that is closest to the community and directly impacts people's lives on a day-to-day basis. There are real, existential issues facing Torontonians, including rampant poverty, crumbling infrastructure, and random acts of violence on public transit.
I agree...and you could have told us Chris Sky's proposals regarding these issues.
Instead, you gave us "yellow journalism".
You seem to be courageous and talented. I encourage you to do better than this.
Caryma, you are pretending to write about Chris Sky, but what you are really writing about is yourself, specifically, that you dislike Chris Sky.
Calling him a "playboy", for example, might (or might not) be accurate, but it's irrelevant to helping your readers decide whether or not to vote for him.
Unless you think your readers are more interested in Sky's personal life than in the ideas he offers as a political candidate.
You wrote:
Municipal politics is significant because it represents the level of government that is closest to the community and directly impacts people's lives on a day-to-day basis. There are real, existential issues facing Torontonians, including rampant poverty, crumbling infrastructure, and random acts of violence on public transit.
I agree...and you could have told us Chris Sky's proposals regarding these issues.
Instead, you gave us "yellow journalism".
You seem to be courageous and talented. I encourage you to do better than this.
One of the worst articles of ever read, who is this author and who urinated in her cereal this morning? Lol
You can run around and defend Chris Sky all you want, he's still not going to fuck you sweetie
Shut up, the article speaks the truth. You're delusional.
should be interesting